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Book genre∆¿
Fanfiction//Romance
Author∆¿
btshiteu20
Book status∆¿
Ongoing
My thoughts∆¿
Ok first of your first chapter was not bad but I think everything is so clustered like you have few paragraphs which I think made your work rough I guess.
Your punctuations where also 🤷at some placed but not all.
Oh I also noticed you used some abbreviations in some chapters.
But never the less I think your books plot is actually nice you know.
Not everyone is perfect but I think your bokk can and would be better ❤️❤️
It just needs some few editing and you are good to go.
Ps:I didn't say any of this to discourage you from writing 🤷❤️😌
What inspired you to write this book→→→→→→→
When and where did you decide to publish it here on Wattpad →→→→→→→→
My ratings∆¿
So this book was good to read and here are my ratings.
For your book itself I would be giving and rating it a 6.5 because I enjoy your plot and I know with time your book would get even better❤️
For your book cover I would give it a 6.5 also .
And finally your book description like I always say I think every books description is like the foundation of a book and for yours I would say that it needs more work❤️
Basically on there you could give a snippet of your story I guess🤷just be creative ❤️
To my readers∆¿
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