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It's unlike me to give you guys an update back to back😂❤️

  I'm just writing this my draft has been emptied lol

So for some time I would try not to gatekeep you guys reviews ❤️😂

Well I only do them when I want a chapter reaches a particular number of viewers 😂

Oh and thank you all for 1.7k reads❤️

it's time for another review let's get this one going 😌😌

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Author:vrbnwriting

Genre: Fantasy

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:
   Ok the first thing that caught my attention was definitely your book description 💆yes it was short but it was good you know short and simple and I enjoyed it and then your book cover it's good I guess.

With the few chapters that have been uploaded I must say they are good you know your punctuations/paragraphing was like good and your chapters are like the right proportion 💆😌

How many words per chapter 🤔?

Although at some places it would need some spacing😌

I always talk about spacing because for me when all the word are kinda like clustered together it gets very confusing and my eyes 😭🥲

I might not be the only one so that is why I'm trying to tell a lot of upcoming authors this❤️❤️

I'm sure your readers can't wait for a new chapter keep up the good work❤️.

Based on what I have read so far I would give this book an overall rate of 7.5 because I feel like it has potential to become great 😌❤️.

To my readers

    Hey you all first I want to say thank you again for 1.7k views 🥹❤️ 1k votes next🤞

Sooo this is another good read for the fantasy lovers add this to your library now I'm sure you would love to read this and follow the author on their journey 😌.

You can find it in my reading list "Books I have reviewed".

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That would be all for now Guys byeee

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