BOOK REVIEWS 2

Unexpected teenage

Hola hola here for another review

I'm feeling discouraged 🥲yeah why don't you guys like to vote for people's works like yes we know you see it and you like it but just click on the damn star I mean that is the least you can do🤷.

It's really discouraging NGL and I don't wanna be discouraged I mean I was just reading a book and it had over 2k views in a chapter and only had 70 votes like srsly is that the best you readers can do😪😪😪 mine is even worst .

Let's forget about this tho on to today's review

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Author:rachel_here13

Genre: Teen romance // Adventure

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

   First off your book cover is so good like it's so captivating both the old and new one they are literally perfect they go well with your books title 😌.

  Oh I really like your book dedication
Because I think a lot of teens are struggling with their teen life 😮‍💨🥲to all those who are struggling it's gonna get better ❤️

Ok introductory chapter (first chapter) was quite good, whose pov was it on if I may ask.

Is the book totally on your main characters pov ??

I'm some paragraphs I felt like some punctuations weren't needed it became too much tho your chapters are writing in a good way I mean their is enough spacing and all but I think you should check on the punctuations .

Oh and your book description could be worked on you know add some few things up there

Along the line it felt like your chapters where beginning to get shorter🤷‍♂️may be you could maybe fix that you know I'm just saying you should try to make all your chapters balanced I don't think he word count should be decreasing 🥲🥲it should go up.

I think your plot is going well I hope your book turn out how yuu have envisioned it ❤️.

Your readers are waiting

To my readers

   Hey guys first off I would really like if you guys can click on the little star below 😭I could cry right now you guys shouldn't read this and ignore VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok you all should check out this book add it to your reading list ❤️ I hope you all like it .

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                          ~Lonleyloner2007🦗🪲