Secrets within secrets

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My last review was 15 days ago😭it felt like forever ngl.
So I hope you all are ready for this one and I hope you all enjoy it😌

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Author:authoriris7

Genre:Teen fiction

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

First off this is actually really good but I'm gonna say your spacing at some certain paragraphs they where quite accurate but at some they kinda went off that is if you noticed.

Your chapters are really good you know really well written apart from the spacing issues I don't think any thing was really wrong here your chapters I might say they where a little short just few chapters tho.

Your punctuations also great, overall your book and the plot was just right on point
For your book description I get how you wanted to portray your characters but I think you did it poorly so yeah I think your book description need to be worked on🥲.

Your book cover kinda fits so I don't think it needs to be changed your good there.

To the author:

I'm genuinely very sorry that this review is coming out late I hope you enjoy this one I wrote ❤️😔

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You all should please check this book out vote and comment ❤️
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I can say that it has been a wierd week because I can't even understand again this chapter was supposed to be uploaded since but I don't know what happened I had to re write it because it wasn't in my drafts anymore and I'm kinda pissed because I can't remember what I wrote in the last one💀💀

But any way you all should enjoy this one I guess it's currently almost midnight and I'm tired so.....

Ummm to those who asked for a review I'm gonna try and post them tomorrow or maybe next week then after that I'm probably gonna Go MIA for some time

Have a nice day you all

Ps: SZA and Billie actually make me happy

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