BOOK REVIEWS 2

They all fall down

😭Yes it's an update,so I finally decided to update his review shop feel like I have been gone forever 🥲🥲.

I'm still gonna apologize to you all because most of you guys asked for a review and you didn't get one and I'm gonna say I'm sorry and if you see this please notify me so we can work on it 😭.

Oh and I posted some information on my conversation board I would really appreciate it if you guys check it out❤️.

Ok I think that is enough let's get to this review 🏃🏃🏃🏃.

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Author:Gryffindoritnb

Genre: Mystery // Young adult

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

First off I love love love your character aesthetics I feel like those actors/actress that where select to potray your characters are fabulous and the first character made me smile because I love ayo so much 😭😂.

Ok so for your chapters/prologue like I said in your comments I really liked your prologue because I kinda connected to it (wierd) because I felt the same way she felt at the beginning 😂.

Oh and I like the way it was written great job.

Your chapters are in-between short and long which isn't bad in just feel like a little more words would be fine also merging two scenes would be really perfect especially when you want to leave your readers in suspense 🥲 I suggest you do that because I feel that would go really well with your book.

If I may ask how many words per chapter 🤔🤔.

Oh and your book cover for me it doesn't really suit your book 🥲yes,I feel like the book title and book cover don't go together also I feel like your chapters should match your cover,name basically what I'm saying is that your book should be in sync and I don't think it is.

Oh and we need more on your book description 🥲I feel like it's to small and the description is kinda plain I get that this is a new project for you bout I mean you can make it pop and wow readers, just saying tho🤷‍♂️😂.

For me your book is awesome for now tho 🥲😂it's still ongoing so let's see where it goes.

To my readers:

Ok guys another book for you all to check out this book is currently ongoing but I'm very sure you guys are going to enjoy the book ensure to engage.

Vote comment and follow the author ❤️
Also follow me for more reviews vote and comment please 😭😭😭I'm literally begging atp.

I feel like I have lost  a lot of readers and that hurts me 😪 yes it does you all dont engage anymore or have you all abandoned my reviews 🥺.

Most of you all even unfollow me when I'm not active 😪and personally that makes me sad but it's fine 😌 I'm not on break anymore tho so I'm back to updating just send in your request and ding you get a review that is if you have successfully completed the tasks ❤️🥺.

Bye for now

                                   ~Lonleyloner2007🦕🪐