BOOK REVIEWS 2

Beneath a dying sky

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Author:_RosesWithThorns_

Genre: Hopeless apocalypse

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

Chapter 1 started off at a great start but then your spacing yes you need to work on your spacing I'm saying this because most readers get confused when ready for someone like me if the words are to clustered my eyes tear up.

You may not be doing it consciously but it should be worked on also your punctuations there where basically all over the place yes in some places where they where needed they where absent and where they weren't needed they where present.

And the spacing issue occurred in most of your chapters if not all we need to change that you can get some reference from some book onnehatbi talking about or even mine if you can write and space this way we wouldn't mind.
     Ok your book description is good literally good yeah it's short but I think it has done it's job and I'm sure anyone who comes across it would definitely want to read with the combination of your book cover I'm sure your gonna get the attention of readers.

Your chapters I would say are coming off good because your are a new writer but your doing good.
  What is your word count per chapter 🤔.

To my readers:
Yep so less words that the previous chapter lol but you all should check this book out I'm sure you would enjoy it.
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