BOOK REVIEWS 2

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Hmmmmm yes another update I'm trying to write all pending requests this one has been here for so long

   And to the author I'm really sorry that I didn't post this sooner 🥺🥺

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Author: kxiii13

Genre: Contemporary lit

Status: Complete // Mature

My thoughts:

   Hmmmmmmmm ok so I read this book your chapters are like really short like really really and that got me confused because I think you could have maybe combined two chapters together or something.

    Your plot is rushed like really rushed because on the chapter where she searched that stuff(I don't want to spoil it) I got a little confused because for me I didn't notice any signs of it in previous chapters because you didn't really bring it up I would say the only hint which technically wasn't was when she was having that thought in her class🌚🥲.

So yes for me your plot was rushed I think you should have taken some time you know let your characters become a strong audience or something before introducing that scene.

I was a little baffled when she tried to tell her new supposed crush about her feelings I mean like come on you just tried to get away from one scene🤔.
  For me that wasn't really necessary I feel like you should have made her maybe alone for some time maybe she should shy away or something.

I get the information you are trying to get out there but I think this book would need a lot of editing like a lot ❤️🥺

I really didn't like the chapters that had like one or two sentences in them

I'm really sorry if you feel I came unto you In a harsh way but I had to say it I'm not saying this to put you down or ignore your effort I'm just saying this so your book could be better.

Your authors note was where I got to understand why you wrote this book and I think you did good writing about it and I'm sorry that happened to you

More over I think you can make this book better I know you can make it better 😌😌.

To my readers

    I still think you all should give this book a read and give the author you honest feedback because they need them tell them what you like and what you don't like about this book.

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