Growing up Dallas

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It's currently midnight yes I'm posting this by midnight so technically it's tomorrow (I wrote this yesterday) and decided to post it by midnight.

And yes it's another review ofc.
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Ok enough just vote before you start reading tho .

And quick notice I don't like sugar coat my reviews trust me if your book is bad I'm gonna tell you and if you read some of my reviews you can see me point out some mistakes or things that needs to be changed so yeah for the rest I genuinely just think their books are in the right path you know so don't take it seriously 🌚.

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Now on to this review

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Author: YuhAuntieCrystal

Genre: Contemporary lit/General fiction

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

Ok first chapter was really good I was gonna say it was a little bit rushed you know toward the ending but then I got to the next chapter and I kinda got the idea.
But still it happened so fast😭.
  Ok your chapter names are kinda good/hilarious ngl.
I get that your trying to add some ghetto to it but at some point it wasn't looking like some urban fiction(you can read some to get more references)

The smut😭helloooooo it felt so detailed but short😔maybe a little longer next time you know for some of us .... Readers

For chapter 4 I feel like he just got into college shouldn't he like get used to his new environment or something before you introduce a girl into the picture because I mean it's technically just what his second day there and there is already this girl I don't know maybe take it slow.
There might be a change of mind tho as you update more.

My main concern for your book is that you make it focused on him and girls which would be sad if your writing an urban fiction you gotta have drama hope you have some installed for us.

Oh your book cover is just not it😔yes it kinda doesn't go with it,we gotta change that(any book cover maker in the house hit the author up).
Same as your book description it just to plain and boring I guess you can work on the book description after you have had a standard plot so for now it can be used but at some point we would need a detailed and good book description.

With what I have read I think your book has great potential that is if you figure it out ❤️😌.

To my readers

Ok ok so this is the other review I promised hope you all like this one because I sure enjoyed writing it 😌
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I think that would be all for now
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Lmao 600+ words well that's a first.

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