BOOK REVIEWS 2

Reapers credo

Ehem ehem it's still Sunday I just posted a current review go and vote on that chapter I'm probably gonna post this on Tuesday but if you see it earlier it's because you all voted good on the last chapter.
       Anyway the confessions pink mango been reading has been making my week 😭like even tho some are traumatizing I still tend to laugh.
  The year is almost over and sadly I actually didn't get anything I wanted.
    I'm actually at that time where I'm like ghosting some of my friends for no reason tho I just feel like I need a break a lot has like happened but I'm never gonna leave u guys😭❤️.
    Unless you all stop voting then my next update would probably be December 2025.
Anyway let's get to this review.

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Author:AlsoSparkZarathustra

Genre:

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

Ok first offffff your book description is really on point that alone would definitely attract the attention of your readers I mean hell yeah.

     First off is chapter one supposed to be like hot she found out she is a reaper??
  If yes I feel like we need to revisit that chapter first of it's to short for an introductory chapter.
   And it doesn't even tell us anything about how  your character reacts to finding out about her new found self.
   We just went to another scene,no no this book has some potential but I feel like you haven't seen the vision (is that wierd to say).
   Could we like get a chapter on her reaction,how she gets used to being half reaper and what exactly is a reaper in your book ?

     Also what exactly happened after the fight in chapter one that is also needed because we have some little clues in chapter 2 but I don't know I feel like it would also have been needed.
      You dived into the supernatural world 🌚with magic
   Question what is the genre of this book.
    Your plot ?
  What and how do you see this book ending?

At some point your book looks like your characters are super heroes and then sometimes they are supernatural and then again they are kids😮‍💨
   What is there age range ?

And then in your paragraphs you misused some punctuation marks which can be edited later on in the book.
   Your spacing is actually great although it gets bad at some places but that can also be worked on.
    I liked that your chapters didn't decrease in word count as it progressed.
  Your book cover is quite catchy I must say

To my readers

Would I say you should read this yes so it wouldn't look like I just came here to criticize this authors work so yep you all read this
    And in the comments tell the author how you feel about there book.
   Try to come off nice.

Anyway that's it for today's review hope you all liked this one it's about 500 + words so yep this was supposed to drop at midnight but I hadn't completed the review by then I was so exhausted 😭 anyway it's here.
     Please I'm actually on my knees right now can you vote🤚🤚😔.
   I'm begging.

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                                   ~Lonleyloner2007🍂☃️