BOOK REVIEWS 2

Whispered obsessions

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Author:Eshi12x

Genre: Contemporary romance

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

So we are gonna start with your book description ok short n' Sweet I like it,it's got everything we need yes it's short but it still hold a lot of traits needed in a good book I mean it's very convincing,it would definitely attract lots of readers attention.

  Your book cover is quite good I don't think there is any issue with it good one on that
If you don't mind me asking where did u get it done.

Your character aesthetics seems nice I didn't get to watch the trailer it wasn't loading 😭.

Hmmm your prologue started off good tho but the scene where she was talking to her dad u kinda rushed it in my opinion the if the dada had just told her pack your bags your switching schools instead of saying the name your know I feel like it would have been a little better then you start off your main chapter with your character in front of the school just saying tho but it isn't bad tho.

For your chapters I think they where written in a good form they seemed short but they came out great I like that you are switching the pics between two of your characters.
Also I fear that your aren't allowing your characters grow I fell like you are rushing the plot🥲
The prophecy/blood chapter I should have put that scene maybe a month after she has gotten into the school it was only her first day of class am I right 🤔.
  Just saying there is no need to rush the plot take your time and this book seems to be mystery x romance so I think it needs to written with a lot of time so both you and your readers would be satisfied.

Also write something that you would be happy with not something that would make you hit a writer's block

To my readers

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