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Author:FahmidHassan
Genre: Coming of age // comedy
Slightly mature
Status: Complete
My thoughts:
Ok your introduction was good like you did really good there the first paragraph was just magnificent.
But you need to work on the spacing I always say this but most times when I like read books that aren't spaced in a like good and readable way my eyes tear up I don't know why and it makes me uncomfortable so I usually advise writers to space their works so we the readers won't have issues when reading.
Also your punctuations in some paragraphs some punctuations weren't supposed to be there while in some places where I expected to see some they weren't there,I still feel like if you break up you current paragraph into two you can fix the errors.
Of I may ask how many words per chapter 🤔
Your chapters came out nice tho for a new writer you did really good with your chapters good job on that one.
Your book description is short and also descriptive which is good your book cover and name go so well I mean literally just perfect.
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