Soooo it's past midnight and
It's October 🎃🎃
My birthday is actually in 3 days😭
Hope you all are doing good tho
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Author:omvralaa
Genre: Adventure//Action
Status: Ongoing
My thoughts:
First off your book description is actually really good tho it's short but it's cool tho you could add like a teaser fromma chapter or something(this can come later on because the book is still ongoing).
For your book cover I like it to
I'm still gonna ask where did you get it done?
On to your chapters with what I have read your book is definitely going great I mean the first chapter was just pure art and it was magnificent,I didn't find any trouble with your spacing or paragraphing they where executed perfectly.
What is your word count per chapter 🤔
Tho at some point in reading I got confused with the amount of characters 😭I felt they where much for the intro but it was still fine.
When will the next chapter be released I'm sure your readers are sitting at the edge of their seats waiting for another update.
With all this I don't think I found fault in any thing except for me I would have included a prologue or something where you give us like the back story of the main character.
To my readers
My oh my this book is gonna be amazing it's still ongoing but I encourage you all to check it out I'm sure your gonna like it.
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Anyway I hope you all enjoy your October because I'm gonna enjoy mine 😭I mean it's my birth month
You can find this book on my reading list tho❤️❤️
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~Lonleyloner2007🎃🥳
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