BOOK REVIEWS 2

The whispering shadows

Hi hi hi

First of Doja cat is so good oh and scarlet was a year old yesterday 💀🕷️(I'm writing this listening to her planet her album btw you guys should check it out)🥹💜

I'm still gonna say sorry to you guys for going mia my bad but I'm back now you can send in your request for reviews but first of ensure to complete the tasks they can be found in the last chapter published or the very first chapter on here.

Before you read this review vote🥹🥹
Now let's get onto this review

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Author: bangpinksister

Genre: Fantasy

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:
    First of your character aesthetics are literally perfect tho I don't know any of them I still feel like they fit your character descriptions good job on that one.

Now for your chapters for your thriller/prologue that was literally unexpected because the specie's your characters portray are usually cursed or something else but this one came with a twist, the prologue definitely did it's job tho it was short but I don't think it would matter that much because it's good.

I got a little confused when I started with your first chapter mainly because of the font size/style that was used I felt like the font you used wasn't going well because I'm used to the font used for dramatic sentences or mostly headlines oh and your punctuations where a little bit all over the place in some places some punctuations weren't needed.

But all in all I think your first chapter was great and it was longer than your prologue so it's going on a great start.
How many words do you think is in every chapter →→→→

I noticed a decrease in length along the line in chapters and chapter 4 needs to be edited yeah there was no spacing at all like paragraphs where missing I'm pointing this out because some people can't focus when reading something like that for someone like me my eyes tear up😔but that is all tho just need it to be spaced that's all.

Oh and your book description is really great both in length and the description for your book cover I would say we have a love and hate relationship it's just in between.

Overall I think your book is starting off at a good place just keep publishing because I'm sure your readers a waiting 😂

To my readers:

You guys are like the ones in charge no so your gonna do something for me please please please vote for this chapter I know I haven't been active but I'm back now just vote that's the only way I know you all still care😭.

Also comment on this chapter don't forget to add this review shop to your readers list ❤️

Also Check out this book I'm sure you guys are going to enjoy it to the supernatural geeks this is for you also vote and leave comments for the author hope you all enjoy it and if you have any suggestions ensure to leave a comment for the author ❤️ hope you all have a great time reading.

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SZA
Sabrina carpenter
Raye
Doja cat
The weekend
Ariana grande
Tems
Giveon
Summer walker
PartyNextDoor
Asake
Flo
Lana del Rey
Rema
Billie ellish
Sexy red
Adele
Ice spice

And some others

I think they have been on repeat through our this year tbh

Can you all tell me what artists got you going through out the year 😗

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