The hole of sickness

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This might be the last update for October not to sure tho unless I get another request.
Well I hope you all like this one and before we get to it can you all

VOTE!   VOTE!!  VOTE!!!

It's the little star down below you all can do that.
Oh and I was kinda surprised by the amount of people that saw the last chapter the very first day that was fast ngl oh and guys we are almost at 4k reads and I'm so excited.

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I need new recommends

Ok I think that would be all now let's get to this review also don't forget to vote❤️

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Author:Moncef707

Genre: Paranormal

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

Ok I would say your book description was written quite ok just need some editing (some misspelling).

Your book cover I'm not to sure I don't know it's just not it,it might match your books vibe and stuff but it actually doesn't look good so yeah I think it needs to be changed.

Because as a reader if I read your book description and I see I like it and your book cover doesn't give me the read me vibe I might definitely loose interest no offense.

For your chapter the first chapter was quite long which is actually rear because you are a new writer but I was confused like a lot I don't know why I had to read your first chapter again. I do admire that your chapters aren't to short tho

Good job on that
Oh and for your book I suggest you use more tags so you could at least get more reads and so your book would be in the recommends.

For my readers:

I think you all should check this one out it's definitely out of the ordinary and I hope you all enjoy it.
Support the author by voting and leaving comments on every chapter you read.

Also don't forget to vote for this chapter, comment and just do what would make your favorite reviewer happy

You all can find this book in my review reading list ❤️

Oh and how's you all's day going??

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                                   ~Lonelyloner2007⏳🎃

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