BOOK REVIEWS 2

Love in the concrete jungle

It's finally the middle of June guys❤️🤧
Is it just me or this year is fast like really fast😭😭

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On to this review guys❤️😫

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Author:Tshepiloveshakeem

Genre: Romance

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts

     Oh so your book description is IT I liked it ,it was really nice ❤️ and also kinda is attractive to the eye😉😉

Your characters are just simple and attractive 😭 like really good I like that it wasn't all over the top its simple and cute😌😌.

Oh and who exactly is Keith powers 🤷seems like I'm the only one who doesn't know him😂lol.

Now for your chapters 🌚🌚
   Your plot is rushed yes baby I mean they just met at a club and he is taking her out on a date and he is already talking about her to his mum.

I mean for me I would have kinda made them meet like twice or maybe trice before they even go on the date or maybe I would have made her play hard to get you know🤷just saying tho, because they met at a club and all of a sudden they are going on a date 🥲.

Yes your writing style is really good I'm not gonna deny that but I think you should have made the book maybe a slow burn I think it would have been like hotter and better ❤️🤭.

Oh and your chapters are medium which are really ok for an upcoming author😌 just ensure to be consistent and I'm sure your book would totally be number 1❤️❤️.

Oh and we want his ex toxic 😭😭yes I said it I want her toxic let her cause some trouble yuu know 😌🔪.
She would be a character I would really want to know more 😉😉.

I think that would be the only thing wrong/or need to be changed your book your plot being rushed 😌😌

Overall your book is good just need some little touch and it would be better ❤️

Hope to see more of your work in the future ❤️❤️

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