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For today's review
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Author:flowerbud09
Genre: Fanfiction
Status: Complete
My thoughts:
First off your book description need to be worked on 😭yes it's a fanfic but I still think you can make the book description fun you know it's just to plane with lots of spaces.
Also your book cover might need some little touches here and there.
Oh and your book is giving off fantasy vibes to.
Your prologue could use some editing to it's quite Short it must necessarily be long but it's can be edited you know make a few changes and add some stuff.
In your chapters maybe it's because of how it was written but your punctuations where like all over the place.
Yes your book has been completed but I feel like you should take some time to edit you know re read/go through it and make some changes because I'm sure there are somethings you would like to remove.
Oh and the length of your chapters a quite impressive
What is your word count.
But for your first book tho I think you did a great job
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