BOOK REVIEWS 2

Spy-ral ties the web of lies

For some reason November seems slow🤔I mean it's just the 11th
  This is me trying to clear my drafts so I hope you all enjoy this one ensure to vote tho like do it now click on ittttttt.
  Oh we reached 1.6k votes and 180 followers isn't that great 😃
   Any way lets get to this review shall we

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Author: LuciferDaredevil2

Genre: Action thriller

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

First offffffff your book cover reminds me of spider man into the spider verse or the whole spiderman franchise in total 😭which is really awesome
  Oh my and your casts are literally looking so good
   I would totally go for your book description yeah looks good.
Great way to start your first chapter tho it was kinda short I don't know how many words per chapter tho →→→→→
     But your punctuations where all over the place 😭😭I think the book should eventually be edited once the book is don because we can't keep those punctuations like that.

I have a question tho why do we have Ryder's narration 🥲 aren't we supposed to have Alix's own or something I'm confused please explain →→→→
  Not saying that the narration segments are bad tho I'm just like confused.

How did you come up with your book name or what got you inspired to give your book this name just explain the logic→→→

Oh and your chapter word count seem to decrease as we are getting into more chapters piece of advice I feel like you shouldn't rush your updates tho take your time Im sure your readers wouldn't mind re evaluate what you have written,correct your errors and make your chapters a little longer if you can merge chapters I mean no one likes a short chapter/update.
  Have fun while writing to

To my readers:

Hey you all
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You all should check this one out and vote comment and support the author this one is really great.
  It's still ongoing but I'm sure you all are going to enjoy it

Also follow me vote , comment and hope you all have a great day
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Sunday November 17th 2024

So I have a bad habit 😭this has been in my drafts since the 11th I'm so sorry to the author because you have asked for a review for like so long and I keep delaying and to my readers I'm also sorry 😔 I know you all missed my dumb ass reviews oh and thank you all for 1.7k votes and 4.4k reads🥹u all are my babies.
   Anyway I'm gonna post this now
So you all should vote and comment
   I want the votes more tho

Ps: I haven't been updating because I'm probably on yt on pink Mango's channel or I'm playing games or I'm busy with sch🤚don't be offended.
  This loner loves you all

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