Hi hi hi I'm back again 😭 this has been in my drafts
Double update today next update might come next week tho 😂 I mean I updated 3 chapters for you guys so .
I keep writing and posting them late because of the view count I usually wait till the previous chapter has reached a certain vote/view count
Yes it's silly but 🤷
Enough rambling here is the review 😭😂
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Author:Emerald_sky17
Genre: Fanfiction
Status: Complete
My thoughts:
Ok so.........
First thing fff your first chapter was kinda cute ngl I liked it .
It's a fanfic I get it but don't you think you should have added a little bit more chapters or maybe make your chapters a little bit long??
It seems English isn't your first language 🥲
Your chapters most had wrong spelling maybe it was a typo or something.
I just really wished it might have been a little bit longer and omg your time skips where funny😂in a good way tho.
Maybe now you completed the book you could take some time to edit it and make it better you know work on your Grammer,plot and stuff
Your book cover 🥲I don't know what to say about it tho🤷🌚
Oh and why Childhood best friends 🥲🤷 ???
Why did they kiss and get married 🥲
I'm asking because of the book title tho
Any way over all I think your book could be worked on based on what I have read
If I would rate your book I would probably give it a 5 out of 10❤️
NOTE:I'm not saying all this to shame your book or anything I'm saying them so your book could become better and so you could know where your mistakes are coming from
Hope you like it
To my readers:
Tho the fanfic lovers this is for you now go read this and leave some cool comments for the author tell them what you feel about their book.
It would help a lot
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~Lonleyloner2007🕳️💨
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