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140 Years Later
I run through the forest, feeling the air against my face. I come to a stop and stop on a tree, I look down to see humans. I quickly and quietly jump the trees heading back to my house, for I was already full. When I got to my house, I walked in. I sat down on my couch and read a book. When I was done, I had plenty of time to spare, so I ran outside my door and headed to where this river was. I had heard legends that on the other side of the river was where werewolves lived. Once I had reached it, I came to a stop, I saw this huge wolf, the size of a bear. A vampire? You are not a Cullen, are you? it asked, "I'm not a Cullen, neither do I know what a Cullen is." I told it. The wolf backed up You can understand me? it asked, I nodded, "Crystal." I tell him.
" Do you know where I can find a Jasper Whitlock, I heard he lived around here?" I asked him. I know of a Jasper, but he's last name isn't Whitlock, it's Cullen he tells me. "Can you describe him to me?" I ask, hoping it's my brother. The wolf looks at me He is a vampire, has honey blonde hair, he can control emotions he tells me. I smile, "Thank you, can you tell me where he lives?" I ask, Yes, he lives in that house behind you the wolf tells me. "Thank you." I tell him as I run up and climb one of the trees, I sit down and face the house. "Come on guys, we need to go hunt." I heard a voice say. "Okay, let me just get Renesmee." I heard another voice say. I heard them getting ready, "Let's go." I heard a familiar voice say, it was Jasper.
If I have time, I might post tonight :)
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The Whitlock Secret: Book 1 of The Whitlock Series (A Twilight Fanfic)
FanfictionJune, the usual young girl that everybody thinks. But what they don't know is that she's a creature...a vampire. A vampire with a secret, a secret that you will find out. I don't own any of these characters except June and a few minor ones
