SERIOUSLY, IT'LL HELP YOU UNDERSTAND.
Okay, so I'd like to say first that my writing skills have gotten better as this book progresses. So, please just stick around for a bit and see if it grows on you.
The second thing is that I know it has sort of an odd pace and that it's a bit quick, it's supposed to be.
That being said, read on, leave a bunch of comments if you please, I need some criticism.
YOU ARE READING
Demolition Lovers (Gerard Way) (COMPLETED)
FanfictionA second pair of footsteps made themselves known as they fell in inconsistent rhythm with mine. My hair whirled around my face when I spun around looking for the owner of the sound. My eyes landed on the silhouette of a man walking a few meters behi...
