Hi Guys
Just so we are clear, I've been reading over my story, playing through some of the Ratchet & Clank games and reading comments left from you guys I have realised that I have messed up a few things with my story.
Like:
~~ The layout of Ratchet's garage on planet Veldin
~~ Ratchets age (When doing some math after finding a R&C timeline, I worked out that Ratchet is in fact 22 in A Crank In Time and meet Clank when he was 15 years old. I am not sure how old Ratchet was when he was sent to Solana but I am guessing not even one yet.) FIXED IN PART 2
~~ The spelling of 'Qwark' in some chapters is wrong (spelt 'Quark') FIXED IN PART 4, 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, 14 AND 15
~~ 'Kaden's' Omniwrench. In the second R&C game Locked and Loaded (Going Commando in USA) Ratchet threw away 2 or 3 wrenches, meaning that he can't have the one he started with in R&C 1 and defiantly can't have it by R&C: Crack in Time as he now has the Omniwrench Millennium 12.
~~ Kaden never told Clank his name. FIXED PART 2
~~ They is really no way to bring someone back from the dead in R&C as Azimuth would have already tried it
~~ I have no idea how Ratchet carries around his weapons, I think Clank might have something to do with it but if anyone knows, please tell me.
~~ How Kaden and Clank get from the Bogon Galaxy, to the Solana Galaxy, then to the Polaris Galaxy. FIXED IN PART 4
~~ Where Clank's apartment is, I said that it was in Metropolis, it is really in Megapolis (Capital of the Bogon Galaxy on planet Endako) FIXED IN PARTS 4, 5, 7
~~ I said that 'Metropolis' has a Planetary Defence Centre, I don't even know if there is a Planetary Defence Centre in Megapolis. KINDA FIXED IN PART 5
~~ Clank isn't as serious like he is in the game
~~ There was no reason why Azimuth was angry at Clank. FIXED IN PART 7
~~ It isn't really known how the Apogee Space station is set up, but I added a few things to it that are either there or not in the game.
~~ Ratchet & Talwyn (If you read the R&C wiki, it states that Talwyn is actually Ratchet's girlfriend),
~~ Dr Nefarious Space Station was not blown up and is still active. But may have really quick built another one.
These are some of the things that I picked up from the story. If there any other differences or mess ups that you have picked up that I didn't. Please let me know by either commenting or private message me so I can make this be as best as can be. I may rewrite the story so it makes a bit more sense once it is done if you want. Also, if you have any ideas of how the story should end, please let me know as well.
Thank you all so much for the support
Grace
AKA CastMagica
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