Hearts and Stars By Lov_lolipops15
Total Reads- 15
Total Votes- 1
Total Comments- 0
March 28, 2012
PG-13
1 Page (1 part)
Poetry and Fantasy
Summary:
Tis a poem!
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It's hard to lie when you write poetry and I felt as if this was lying to me. You were trying to convey the feeling of lost love, but it didn't feel real to me.
I think you were trying to focus more on rhyming the words than what the words were actually saying. The emotion was lacking in this and I think if you were to explore more, The emotions of lost love. you could write something powerful.
BINABASA MO ANG
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