Hey loveables, I recently got some "constructive circumstances" on my board. They were saying how the fight scene in the beginning made no sense. Cus Rosie didn't sense anything but a feeling of "off". Opinions? Do you feel the same or did you like it cus it was so unnoticed and dramatic. Second they have a problem with my grammar and spelling granted I'm horrible at it and I wright with the flow without caring. Do you think I should get a editor for those or do guys not care? Lastly they had a problem with me use numbers instead of writing out the word like 2 instead of two cus it looks "unprofessional". Does it really matter if it looks professional or not does it? Let me hear you I want to know your feedback cus I was worried about these mistakes in the beginning but since noone said anything I didn't think anyone had a problem with it. So thoughts?
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Daddy's Bunny
RomanceRosiella was forced to grow up to fast in the darker side of the worlds sins when she finally escaped she tries to live a childhood she never had. Antonio is a mafia boss ruthless in his ways of work. After many heartbreaks and betrayals he gave up...
