How many times have you started a new story, read a few lines, than stopped?
Probably more than you can count... unless your the kind of person that gives everything a chance, which, by the way, is not me.
I always read to enjoy the book, and than reread it to learn how to make my writing give others the same feelings I felt, so if I read a book with a terrible beginning, I'm more likely to stop, hoping it doesn't affect my beginnings.
Which are terrible anyway.
So I'm not stopping you, if you dislike my book or just got bored, Tap away, I can't blame you.
Just one thing.... can you leave a comment telling me whatever you thought boring and disliked?
PWEEEAAASEEEE!
Seriously, would it be THAT hard?
Even if it was a poorly written, grammar denied and no spelling comment and looks like it's sent from hell, that will make my eye twitch, I'll take it.
"I dnt lk ur story & wll stop rding cu@se theres nt enof dtel@is & I gt bord so I clickd awy, u nd 2 @dd MRE dtel@s, C u l8r or Nt"
I'm sorry for making you read that... but pity the one who WROTE it.... like the "Nt" WHAT WOULD'VE IT HAD TAKEN YOU TO ADD A FUDGING 'O'?!
Oh and btw thanks for clicking/ tapping on this book, means millions x
So with that, let's start!
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I cringe, annoyed.
"Look, I don't want your pity," I spat, angry and embarrassed.
A small hand intwines in mine, and I hold Ani's hand tightly.
"I don't pity you, Evelyn,"
I give him a bitter smile, and Andi holds my other hand, he was scared too. I couldn't really blame him, he was young.
"Yeah right," I mumbled. My voice was still cold and bitter
"Look, you suddenly dropped out of school. Two weeks later, I find you on the streets, with two six year olds, I just want to help!"
"You can help my sorry ass by Effing off" I reply
Ani bursts into tears.
"Ani?" I ask softly, my cold interior fading away so I can talk to my younger sister.
She doesn't reply, so I crouch next to Andi so I can whisper in his ear.
"Can you be a big boy and comfort your twin sister while I talk to this guy?"
He nods confidently "I knew I was older!"
I don't say anything to crush his dreams.
I turn back to face my classmate.
"Leave" I command
"No way-"
"I said leave!"
He looks at me pleadingly "please let me-"
He gets cut off.
"Ev?" Asks Andi
"Yeah?" I said
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Everlasting #Wattys2018
Humor"Mummy? What does everlasting mean?" "Forever... infinity," "But you said nothing lasts forever? Does that mean nothing's everlasting?" "There are some things in the world that'll never die... they have no form. They're not an object neither a human...
