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Recap:
Eleanor was stading there, with an impressive dark blue aura surrounding her. There was a visible smirk on her lips, and her redish eyes were clear as day. (ELEANOR IS SUCH A SWEET AND KIND GIRL IT JUST WORKS FOR THE STORY)
She pointed at Mel and said, "You. I will finish you today."
Mel backed away from Louis and said, "Bring it on."
Eleanor created a bubble around them, launching them up a few feetin the air, then floating over the pool.
"Who ever gets hit first, falls." She smiled a sickeningly sweet smile.
"I'm ready for whatever you throw at me."
Mel's POV
I glared at the girl. How did she suddenly get powers out of no where? Did she almost drown? Was she kissed like me, Katie and Audrey? I doubt it.
It crossed my mind that we haven't done anything to try and figure out why we became mermaids. We should do that. (you a genius!)
Eleanor created a small ball of fire in her hand, causing us to go a little higher.
She smirked and said, "I will give you the first move."
"I couldn't let me, the one with the upper hand, let a newbie go second. I insist, you go first." I said, copying the tone of her voice.
"Gladly." She smirked as the bubble grew bigger, width wise.
She looked at me right in the eyes, like a stalkerish way, not letting me look anywhere else, in able to move.
I knew she was going to attack, but my body wouldn't budge. The only thing I could do was turn invisible, hoping her freakish eye spell would wear off.
I knew that Zach had the same effect on me when we fought for the last time. It was creepy how they slightly resembled each other.
She smirked as the fire in her hand grew bigger, pulling it back to throw it at me.
I summonsed all of my strength and tore away from her gaze, easily throwing her off course. She stumbled to the left side of the balloon.
I took good use of this time by backing against the wall, an creating a small whirlwind, lifting Eleanor off the ground slightly, and hitting her against the sides of the bubble.
"W-what is happening?" She asked to no one in particular.
"Your getting your baby donkey kicked!" Katie yelled from below us.
"I didn't ask you." Eleanor spat, turning to me again. "I really, really-"
Eleanor was cut off by the bubble popping, due to Audrey. I was bracing for the impact, but instead I fell on someone.
I opened my eyes to see Louis had caught me with his arms stretched out, while he was wincing in pain. I quickly got off of him and examined the back of his arm.
Holy bananas.
His arms were lined with dirt, blood, and gravel. I winced myself, looking at his injury.
I heard a splash, turning to the pool. Eleanor had fallen in, growing a tail and pointy, longer ears.
"What the fashizle?" Audrey said, walking closer to the girl. "Are you a siren?"
"...Yes." El said, crossing her arms as a smile crossed her face.
Eleanor began singing, as Louis became stiff and his eyes lost color.
I ran over to him, touching his now stone face slowly, hoping he would react in anyway. I was worried, and clearly Eleanor was too.
"What did you do?!" I yelled, turning to Eleanor. "You turned him to stone!"
"I thought that a siren's singing was suppose to make people fall in love-"
"Sirens were made to kill sailors! You just may have killed him!" I yelled, turning back to the stone Louis. "Louis, please, answer me. I love you! Please, please..." I sobbed, gripping his cold hand.
(More old carrot stuff: "Louis, answer me, before I take away Kevin.")
Louis didn't move, what-so-ever.
Louis, answer me!
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