So, before I can continue to part 2 of this story, I wanted to go back and change a few things I am a little unsatisfied with. I was only 14 or 15 and my writing reflects my maturity at the time.
I think I made both mcs look like bipolar assholes. I want to tweak Jason's personality into a more responsible, darker, brooding and quieter type. After all, the guy's mum died and he had a little sister and an entire pack to take care of at a really young age. I like how Teressa is a smartass all the time but looking back at it, its kind of cringy how she constantly has this single mantra preceding everything she says; I am strong and I ain't afraid of anything and honestly some of her choices make no sense at all. I want to work on the character development a little bit more for all my characters, especially the MCs, Trisha, Eric and Zach.
I want to tie up a couple of loose ends that I noticed my story has.
So, the note is that this story might start to look really different. I already went back and made a few changes but I think my story needs maturity :(
I know I am an awful person for ending this book on a cliffhanger but the story line for the next book is based largely on the demon/hell/Lucifer scenerio so I had to introduce it somehow >_< (forgive me 🙏). So I just wanted to let you guys know that first I am going to clean up this story (vamp it up) and then I am going to work on the second book.
Thank you guys for staying with me through this journey. Honestly y'all make my day but giving my work a read.
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Destined to be a Rogue (Alphas and Rogues#1) {Will be Edited Soon}
Werewolf| C O M P L E T E D | "I am an Alpha, an Alpha without a pack, an Alpha who was betrayed by none but her own flesh. But I shall avenge my dishonor and I shall return stronger than before. Beware." A lone rogue. A world of chaos. A forbidden love...
