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Hello to everyone who read this story. I just want to say a quick thanks to everyone who read this story, it's the very first thing I've ever completed writing on this website so thanks for sticking with it.

However, this was my very first story and clearly there's a lot of room for improvement which is why is wanted to try to rewrite it and make it better. The new story is a lot more dynamic and I think just better in general. Everyone has their own motivations and there's subplots regarding other characters and the characters are more developed.

There will be some changes in the plot but for the most part the overall story is the same; a girl who's trying to hide a secret while also grieving her parents and develop relationships with the people in the town despite lying to them, and another girl who is trying to reveal Addi's secret to everyone.

I would really appreciate it if you checked that newer version out because I think it's an improved version of this one. So far there are a couple chapters out. Thanks!

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