Hey guys.
I know it's been a long while but I decided to re-read this story and came to the conclusion that it's pretty rushed and cringy so I was thinking about re-writing it and wanted your opinion.
Should I?
or
Shouldn't I?
If yes the plan is to follow both the books and the movies, tweeking some bits to fit both sources and to fit Cassie, most of the plot would remain including Cassie's transformation but everything else wouldn't be so rushed.
Your opinions on what you'd like to see different are welcome and although some or most might not be actually used I will try and keep them in consideration while re-writing.
Thank you so much for the love you gave this story, it's really good to get a lot of feedback, both negative and positive, it has help me evolve as a writer.
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