MeltDown The Original Draft

Chapter #6 Earning a Stalkers trust

"Really?" I said

"Your dad was a Stalker." He replied "What did your mom talk about your dad?"

I then touched my heart and i looked down i remembered something my mom say..

"Mom was my papa good?" I onced asked her when iw was eight years old

"Your Father was a great man. He sacrificed everything just for a dying race, Humanity ."

I also remembered my mom telling my dad's act of courage and duty. He did not thought about himself. He thought about the good and the evil.

"I never knew my father that much sir.. " I then felt very bad.Aleksi then touched my shoulder and nodded.

Then suddenly i heard the unmistakable sound of two metal peices striked together! With Human screams.

"Whats that sound?" Niko looked around

"It's comming from the medical ward!" Scar said

"Lets go Danielle you comming?!" Harakov asked

"Yeah where is Chernov and Sokolov?" I asked

"They went to the medical ward lets Go!" Levi said and grabbed my hand

Then we saw Medics and Doctors rushing to the Medical ward they are all Stalkers

Then..As we reached the place...We found

"LALALA!" Chernov shouted and started to hit two frying pans and screaming and jumping around like a moron

"Weee-Wee!!" Sokolov was shouting and hitting frying pans together.

"Idiots." Scar said

Levi started to laugh because they looked and acted like idiots.

Then a female doctor.Well she had a Stalker patch at her left arm. She has a blonde hair she was very annoyed she had a name tag it read..Ania

"You two Renegades! Get out of the medical ward you are disturbing the patients!" She shouted then Sokolov and Chernov stopped.

"But! Mam!" Chernov said

"Out now! Or i will shoot you with my pistol!" Ania shouted

"But this is a coma ward! Dont you like the patients to wake up?" Chernov replied

"Shut up Renegade! Your faction symbol is a scorpion i will squash you like a lowly bug!" She said

I cant help it but i started to giggle. Ania was super pissed then one of the patients woke up! He started to gasp for air.

"Wow! It worked!" Sokolov was surprised

Then Ania ran towards him and put on an "Calming agent" to make the Stalker relax

"His breathing stabalized his awake.. Well uhh Thanks. I'm sorry for insulting your faction the renegades." She started to scratch the back of her head and she was blushing she is obviously ashamed.

"Everyone make mistakes." Chernov said and touched her head " Now go on help the patients in need. They always need good doctors like you." Chernov smiled

"Yes." Ania said

"Oh whats your name?" Ania asked

"Im Chernov Corpsman or Medic." He smiled

"Im Ania nice to meet you." She then shakes the hand of Chernov then the Megaphone turned on making a ringing sound

"Whats that?" Harakov asked