MeltDown The Original Draft

Chapter #10 Fucking Spartans..

I have lost all faith in humanity.I just sat at the pavement while the soldiers move towards the final objective..'The Church'

Fyodor kneel in front of me and said "Danielle pull yourself together we can finally end this and you can finally leave the Penal squad."

I looked at him I started to cry not tears of joy that I finally get out but somewhere out there something in me died he pat my head. Gavrill and Angela stood behind me.

"What did you see?" Angela asked

"I...I had to kill these kids.." I said while running short of breath "And I witnessed one get raped infront of me."

"These abuses have existed a long time ago. I seen it too." Gavrill said

It hurts me when I find out these kinds of people exists. I'm the type of man who believes that everybody deserves a second chance..Not these people they deserve to get their dicks chopped of with a dull box cutter and then have it reattached only to be eaten by a bunch of freaks radiation can offer!

These kids have been fucked by Unity. I stopped crying I stood up grab my Kalashnikov and said "I want them dead."

"That's the spirit!" Gavrill said "Lets kill some Unity bastards."

We were marching towards the church all of our forces are held back waiting for the right time to attack.We will cut the head of the snake and end it all. We are only 50 meters away from them and you can see their flags flying against the wind we are not even shooting yet and shots are being exchanged sounds like hunting rifles they run out of good guns and are now surrounded. We lay on dried canal turned to a trench around the burning city.

"Are you ready?" A penal commander asked us

We nodded and before we were even ready they started to play a song...Here is the lyrics

"O filthy Commies,

You are not brave at all.
The sound of your voice
Has been silenced.
The State was built.
We will take through battle
The lands of yours we wish.
So much of your lands.

We will make your wives
Concubines
And make your children
Our slaves.
Your resources will do you no good.
They will not save you from becoming,
Slaves to the nation of sons,
The brave knights."

"Sick bastards! at least we know who are we fighting against." Fyodor said

"Sir. The Unity soldiers are outnumbered and out gunned we can take this place and capture their leader no problem." A scout reported

"Who cares if the leader is alive they are all scum." I replied

Then we saw RPG soldiers line up canal. Once they shoot we will charge.

"FIRE!" The man shouted and the church's bell tower went down.

"GO GO GO!" Fyodor screamed

The windows and possible sniping areas are being shot at they cant shoot back all they can do is...die

We ran and none of us got hit or hurt it was all going smooth.

We ran at the courtyard of the church and took cover at the pillars supporting the structure.

"Grenade out!" Angela screamed and blasted the front door.

I rushed in first and I was ready to shoot anyone. When I was inside they were shooting back at me! But they were not hitting me they are all shooting at random directions but I played it safe and stay as low as possible to the ground. These guys are poorly trained so I stood up and shot only three bullets and..