The only reason I'm posting 3 re-write chapters in one sitting is because I thought Chapter 1 and 2 only needed editing
Re-written on December 14th 2021TW: Abuse
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She felt the next hit way before it actually reached. This was her normal. She forgot to keep the food warm and now the miss was angry.
"Stop crying you mutt,"
Crying. It was something Mrs and Mr didn't like. When her eyes filled with water and dirtied the floor. She's learned to stop but not when she's hit. She can't control it.
"I SAID STOP CRYING YOU BITCH!" She held in her wails of pain. She tried her best she really did, but she let out a small squeak as the man kicked her once again.
Mrs wasn't too far away. Watching her get hurt. She didn't like it when Mrs smiled. It meant she didn't get hurt enough. She didn't like when Mrs was angry either. It meant she'd be hurting soon. Mrs said something but everything sounded too loud. It wasn't until one last kick from Mr did the hits stop. The lights turned off and she was left alone.
She tried to move. Tried to find her friend. They weren't to far, she could hear them, but everything hurt. She doesn't remember it getting this bad. Something in her told her to just close her eyes and rest. The hurt would go away if she rest. She shifted a little more, not liking the cold water under her, it smelt wrong. Soon her eyes could no longer track the moonlight as she drifted off.
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"IRHE WHY THE FUCK IS THERE A CAT IN THE HOUSE!?" The woman screamed.
The girl opened her eyes to realise that everything in the house looked different, everything was brighter, she felt like she was lower. You're lying down.
"Just toss the thing out. Bet it came in here to steal our food." Irhe shouted from the top floor.
She was confused. A cat? Could that be another friend? Her friend? She lifted her head remembering she had laid down but something grabbed onto her neck. Mrs? The thought ended as soon as she began once she was tossed outside.
Mr and Mrs never let her out. Why would she want to be out? To be free, someone whispered. She shook her head as she picked herself off the ground. She was wet. Water was falling on her. It was cold and nice and for a moment she enjoyed it.
Leave. The voice whispered. She shook her head again and saw a little opening. She didn't know where it led to but someone told her to go through and so she did. The other side looked no different so she walked along the fence like how she did when she needed food and didn't want Mrs or Mr to hear her.
Sometimes there were bright lights above her sometimes not. She didn't know where she was going or how long it had been but eventually, she felt her long-forgotten pain. She stumbled forward before it became too much. She didn't want to stop though. Not being back felt nice. The water felt nice. Being outside felt nice but her body thought otherwise.
Suddenly a bright light lit the sky. She saw the water that fell for a second. Saw everything for such a short moment. Everything felt right for a moment.
The loud boom that followed told her otherwise. The loud boom told her Mrs would grab her. It sounded Mr yelling. She thought she heard him. She didn't want to go back. She held herself and curled into a tight ball. She didn't listen to her pain or the voice that she could no longer hear.
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Even after re-writing this chapter ended up shorter than I was hoping but I did like how it turned out.
Also I absolutely changed the first thing in my story from being an opening dialogue to text because my brother judged it and I'm petty.
Check out the next 2 chapters hehe
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