Family Problems (Boyxboy+mpreg)

Part 9

Hey guys, I really need some feedback. I feel like I am doing really bad with this book. Looking at Different Struggles and Time Flies, I have comments on almost every part. On this one this is part 9 and I have one. This makes me think I am disappointing you guys with this one and I am really considering deleting and just leaving it... so any feedback would be appreciated :) Thank you.

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 “Okay, what’s with the water works? Huh baby?” Daddy asked Dad and hugged him, well rubbing his back. I sniffled and wiped under my eyes well taking off Dads uniform and grabbing one of their shirts, so I wasn’t just in my boxers.

 “He’s just… so grown up Ty. How could I let this happen? He’s supposed to stay my baby…” Dad cried well Daddy held him tighter.

 “Cole… why don’t you go watch your siblings for a minute? Come back in here so we can talk in about twenty minutes. Alright?” I nodded rubbing my eyes again before walking out. I should have gotten an abortion… I’m so stupid thinking this wouldn’t mess up my whole family. I didn’t go back to the living room I went down to my room. When I got in my room though Travis was laying across my bed…. Shit… I hope he doesn’t smell… I don’t want to get sick right now.

 “Hey, hey!” He jumped and got up, rubbing his eyes. “Are you drunk? High?” He shook his head and got up moving closer to me, but I moved back. I don’t deserve to be held or comforted to anything right now.

 “I was looking after some of my friends and they got into some trouble so I had to run. I was just tired. I didn’t drink or do drugs. I swear.” I nodded and looked away from him to rub under my eyes. “Hey… are you crying? What’s wrong baby?”

 “My D-dad was just cr-crying and saying… h-how could h-he let this h-happen… I messed u-up their lives. All of th-theirs. E-especially y-yours.” I heard Travis come up behind me and wrap his arms around me.

 “This was an accident, yes. But baby… These little guys.” He rubs my stomach. “Obviously wanted to be here. Yes, it is going to be hard. But everyone is going to be so supportive and here for us. Hunny… Everything is going to be okay.” He kissed my neck and swayed with me to calm me down a bit. When my crying went to sniffles, I turned and hugged him.

 “I thought you were going to the party?” I sniffled and held him tighter.

 “I was there for a bit but then the guys wanted to go smoke so we went to the park and the got high well I was keeping watch, the cops caught us and we ran.” I looked up at him and kissed him.

 “I’m glad you’re alright babe. Thank you for coming home sober.” He nodded and kissed me again but longer and right when it started getting intense my Dads walked in.

 “Oh, good I was just calling your phone Travis. Can we have a talk with you guys?” I turned in Travis’s hold again and nodded before Travis and I moved to sit on my bed. Daddy leaned against my desk well Daddy sat down on my chair.

 “I’m sorry for what I said upstairs. You weren’t supposed to hear that and it was mostly my pregnancy hormones going crazy… again.” We all talk for a while before we all went back upstairs and finished watching all the Halloween Towns before having some hot chocolate before going to bed.

 ~Seth~-23wks, Seth. 21wks, Cole.

 I was feeling the pressure of the holidays. It was a couple days before Christmas and I was still trying to recover from the twins birthday last month to be fully aware right now… kids are so stressful and being twenty-three weeks into my pregnancy isn’t helping.