Separated Lovers

CHAPTER FIVE: THE INCIDENT

The incident...... the incident that lead to the partial hatred of Rachel to Cameron.

It happened during the one month difference of when Rachel told Cameron she was leaving and the day that she left.....

They were in their advanced mathematics program.....

C: Hey, Rachel, you are good in making stories. Can you please help me? Mr. Ferguson assigned us in our acting class to make a story and play it out. I need you to help me refine it.

R: Oh! Fine, okay.

The story Cameron and his group came up with was a murder story in which Cameron is the victim. While Rachel was reading it... she said

R:Hmph! What if you really died? You deserve to die, after all you did to me.

C: In your dreams... I can't die! I have hopes and dreams, I want to have a family! Unlike you, I have to get things the hard way.

R: Oh really? Fine, then you must be counting the days till I leave.But know this, I didn't get into that academy by luck. I spent over thirteen hours pouring my thoughts and expressions into my submission. And I earned it.

C: Rachel, I am sorry, I did not mean it. Don't leave.

R: It sounded real to me. And by the way,don't think that you are the only person on Earth that has hopes and dreams, I too have hopes and dreams,.

(Rachel stormed out of the center where they held the program)

(In their actual classroom, Rachel and Cameron seat next to each other)

(During class)

R: Miss Jones, can I sit at the front of the class? I cannot see the board clearly.

Miss Jones: Uhm.... sure. Kathy, switch seats with Rachel.

Rachel knew she had to be away from Cameron, even for a little while. She knew that if she did that, Cameron would know how hurt he made her.

Three days later, Rachel left for New York.

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