Hello, I am nearly done with chapter 12!! I am adding final touches, and I am making a big deal of it but it is not the final chapter. But before I post it I thought I would let you guys know that I have gone through previous chapters and edited them to improve punctuation, grammar and to plug up plot holes lmao. so if you wanted to take a look, the pacing of the story is far better now because I actually added commas to earlier chapters.
I literally cringed looking at my old chapters but decided not to change them much other than grammar and punctuation, anyway that's it.
I will see you all soon in chapter 12!!
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FanfictionWhen Nami is left in a debilitating state, it seems the captain is the only one capable of caring for her. As their affection for each other unwittingly grows, a new enemy encloses them from all sides. A story of new love, pain, guilt and comfort...
