SUMITRANANDAN

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SO plzzzzzz forgive me not updating that long because my grandmother got expire so I was not able to give time to my work.but, she was suffering from two years from cancer and she was not able to get up from bed (vo bhout zyada tadap rahi thi) now she is free from that pain .5

that's why I was not able to update now may her soul rest in peace , may sri ram provide her peace.

JAI SRI RAM

भगवा न उनकी आत्मा को शांति दे


NOW STORY BEGINS

maa..... maa.... screamed shatru as he entered into shiv ji 's temple where his mother was worshiping shivling.

what happen shatru why are you screaming? asked sumitra after joining hands against shivling.

maa your beloved son is again beating amarjeet said shatru in a complaning tone.2

ye ladka bhi naa (this boy ..) said sumitra as she went with shatru to her beloved son.

(any guess who is that beloved son)2

IN GARDEN

an eight year old boy beating another eight year old boy blue and black.

other boy's condition was worse as if he would pass anytime.

what did you say about my mom hun? asked first boy in anger as if he would burn whole world with his anger.2

what did you say? ???? the boy roared.

second boy was not in condition to reply anything.

STOP IT LAKSHMAN!!!!!!!!!

yelled sumitra as she saw her first soumitra was beating amarjeet.

lakshman's hand was about to punch him but stop in middle as he heared his mother's voice.

what is this lakshman? why are you beating him? asked sumitra in high voice.

laksh was looking at amarjeet with this red eyes and his whole body was shivering in anger.

I asked something laksh? said sumitra in equally angry tone.

but laksh didn't say anything , just then mother of amarjeet came.

hey bhagwaan kaise janvero ki trah mara hai mere bete ko, kaisa beta hai sumitra ka .2

insaaan toh hai hi nahi rakshaash hai rakshaash said ratnavati( mother of amarjeet)3

now queen sumitra's anger was on peek she can not listen any word against her son so she dragged lakshman with her to her room.queen kaushlya and kaykayi was behind her telling her to stop but she was not listening to any one.2

sumitra locked the door as she enter in with lakshman and tie laksh in roopes with pillar, she sarted to beat lakshman with stick very badly. but our laksh didn't even say anything and taking punishment from his mother wholeheartly.2

just the noises of metaled stick could be hear throughout the palace and outside of door two other queens of aayodhya were beating door and asking sumitra to open it. the youngest son of raghu clan was sobbing loudly because his mother was beating his elder twin.

shatru go, go fast tell this to your pitashree said a teary eyed kaushalya.

shatru went to his pitashree while sobbing .

as he enter in his father's chamber he heard voices of his father along with his two brothers

satru entered and started to cry loudly hugging his father.

satru!! what happen to my son? why is he cry? asked king to his prince

voh.. maa..... ma... is b..beating.. beating lak.. laksh. bha bhaiya satrughan managed to say

what?????? why is sumitra doing this?

laksh bhaiya beat amarjeet na that's w why

kaykai's family is always behind the happiness of my family said dashrath.1

AFTER 45 MIN

Sumitra at it's enough now open the doors said dashrath in anger.

as soon as these words came out dashrath's mouth metal's stick broke down leaving a sweaty sumitra and wounded laksh .

just then laksh look at his mother who has tears in his eyes and instantly tears rolled down his eyes by looking at his mother's tear. lakshman who didn't cry in whole session is now crying by looking at his mother's tears.2

open the door sumitra the king of koshal roared in anger.

sumitra open door and went from there not meeting anyones eyes.

whole family went inside to check laksh and laksh just stood there looking at the door from where his mother left.


NIGHT

there was darkness in palace every one went into deep slumber except two people.

sumitra and her elder soumitra. they both were crying for giving pain to each other.

laksh can't see tears in his mother's eyes and sumitra can't see a wound over her son's body.

unable to control himself anymore he came out of chamber which brothers shared and went to his mother chamber.

door was lock so he went from window and entered his mother's room , after reaching there most deadly sight he saw . he saw his mother was crying in dark .

soon a small palm wiped her tears as she turned she saw her child with red and blue marks all over his body.2

maa I will never beat him again sorry said laksh holding his ears cutely.2

soon sumitra grabbed his hands and kissed her palm, cheek,forhead multiple times.

I am sorry said sumitra holding her ears and tears were flowing from her eyes.

no maa said laksh pouted .

why you pissed me off laksh you know na when I beat you it pains me said sumitra crying and touching his wounds.

maa he was saying you are just salve to his bua and we are your sons so me and satru also slave of him because kaykai maa is his bua said laksh .2

so what's wrong in this yes we are to serve them here said sumitra getting up from bed.

maa no you are queen not slave 1

we are here to serve laksh said sumitra holding laksh'shoulders.

we

yes we three are

but

maa I love my family

me too laksh but we three have to be in our limits laksh.

yes you are prince but there is not any right on aayodhya of you two, you two are there to serve ram and bharat.

you are not raghunandan laksh you are sumitranandan said sumitra with determined voice looking at lakshman's eyes.1

and that was the time when lakshman realized his purpose of life lakshman changed after that and promise to him self to be sumitranandan throughout his life.2


SO GUYS TELL ME HOW WAS IT ?

IT TOOK TOO LONG TO WRITE THIS CHAPTER?

AMARJEET IS SON OF KAYKAI'S BRORTHER AND JEALOUS OF LAKSHMAN BECAUSE OF HIS POWER , GOOD LOOKS ,SMARTNESS AND BECAUSE OUR LAKSH IS CRUSH OF MANY GIRLS!!!!!!2

AND SOON WILL BE JEALOUS OF LAKSHMAN BECAUSE OF URMILA!!!!2

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