#39 Give her a chance

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WELCOME BACK SIDNEETIANS!!
CHAPTER:39
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I am not getting a very response on this book and i have no idea why .. In some chapters you guys are like - Its the best book , I love it and every good think but in others its just comments which you feel are mandatory to put and its not from your heart ... I genuinely want to know where i am going wrong .. please don't be nice ... I would appreciate constructive criticism... because faking will not do any good to any of us ... neither will i get response nor will you get good chapters .. So please tell me , I want to try to improve and provide you a better quality work ... And this is just not for this chapter or this book , its for all my work and all other writers work .. Honest feedbacks are important and we would love our readers to give us that ... Thank You :)

Lets begin...

**AUTHOR'S POV**

She walked inside , with a gift in one hand and hand of her son in another ... The hall was decorated in blue-white colour , which was the theme of the party ... Everyone's lips turned into a smile as they saw her .. Avni hugged the ladies and gave a nod to boys ..
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Sam: hello everyone ..

Vaish: Hi Sam , How are you doing ? 

Sam: I am doing good .. Where is Anaya and Atharav bhai ?

Abhay: They are in Atharav's room

Sam: okay .. mumma i am going to them ...

Avni: okay baby ..
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And Sam ran to Atharav's room ...
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Avni: Hii.. so what's the plan now ...

Sumedh: we told Sid and he said that he and Anu gonna act like everything is fine , if Anaya wants that ...

Avni: ooh.. i .. i don't know what to say .. like its very brave of them ...

Vibha: we just hope everything goes well ... You know like Anushka,  she has been behaving very weirdly ... She doesn't even bother to come and Anaya ..

Jan: Aunty we never know what's in her mind ... And i am sorry to say this, specially in front of you Avneet but we should not abandon Anushka like this ... I know what she has done is not cool but she is our friend, like siddharth is .. and she has stood by each one of us , we should atleast give her a chance ... I remmember when i told you guys i want to marry Faisu and u guys just gave me a clear NO .. She was the one who genuinely supported me .. Faisu might be a lil innocent and not like everyone of us but the way he makes me feel , no one else ever did ... I am living a life , i always wanted to .. I have a loving husband and a daughter and an annoying cat , who leaves her fur every where she goes *chuckles* and I can't be happier,  if Anu wouldn't push me that day , if she wouldn't have supported me when no one else did , I wouldn't have all this ... And it isn't just me who she has supported,  Sumedh it was her who gave you that courage to tell your parents that you want to pursue music .. And now when she is going through something,  can't we all just hear her once ..  Even if the situation here is completely different but she , doesn't our Anu deserves a chance to speak ...

Sumedh: You are right,  I think we should hear her out ...

Abhay: even i think so ..

Vaish: even i think the same ...

Mallika: me too

Vibha: okay then as you guys wish ... But don't expect me to understand, Sid is my son and I won't ever like a girl who destroyed his life ...
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And everyone nodded understanding..
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Faisu: Vibha Aunty do we have more samosas..
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He said appearing from nowhere , with a half eaten samosa in one hand and Snow white (his cat) in other ...
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Vaish: Yes beta , there is more on the Table there ...

Faisu: that's finished and i want more ...

Jan: there were more than 50 samosas in that .. You ate them all alone ...

Faisu: not me alone ... even snow white had some ..
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And snow white frowned ...
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Jan: Seriously Faisu ?

Faisu: Yes of course ...

Jan: Sometimes I wish , I didn't listen to Anu ...
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And everybody laughed for the first time on this rough day ... 
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Faisu: What did Anu told you ?

Jan: Nothing, absolutely nothing.. Faisu do one thing , go and check on Zoya , she is in Atharav's room ..

Faisu: As you say my dear Wife ..
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And he left ..
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Abhay: That man is a single peice..

Mallika : True ..
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And everybody laughed again ..
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Vaish: please have a seat guys,  i will get you all something to drink meanwhile ...

Avni: lemme help you ..

Vibha: No avneet you rest , its not good to work in first 3 months... I will company Vaish ..

Mallika: Aunty you stay, i will do that...
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And Vibha smiled at her .. They left and everyone continued to talk but Avni's mind was stuck at a thought- She was jobless now ... Even after her begging , she didn't get the job back .. so now she has to search for another , which is hella job in itself...
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Abhay: Avneet ..

Avni: huh?

Abhay: are u fine ..

Avni: ya ya .. i am good ...

Sumedh: How is your job going ?

Avni: g-great .. great ..

Vibha : Sid was telling me that you sing well ...

Sumedh: she is amazing, We even approached her to work with our band ...

Jan: really? Thats great .. so you are gonna sing today Deal ?

Avni: no actually i-

Vaish: Comman Avneet , don't be shy ..
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She said as she served everyone juice ..
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Mallika: Yeh why don't you Sing and Siddharth play guitar.. its gonna be fun .. or atleast we could do something to divert siddharth's mind from Anushka..

Avni: I don't think its a great idea .. Plus i have never sang in front of people ..
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She said remmembering morning's incident,  she isn't gonna sing in front of Anushka...
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Vibha: its okay .. please be comfortable ..
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And she smiled and with that kids marched down to the living room with Faisu and snow-white...
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Anaya : Its time to call Mom and Dad ...

Vaish: How are u gonna make them come at same time ?

Anaya: they will be together na .. its their anniversary and if dad is not at home then he will be with her na ... What i am gonna do is call him and tell him that i fall from stairs and i think i broke my ankle and no one is at home .. listening to this they both will come running...
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And every body panicked..
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Abhay: I need to make a call .. then u can call them .. okay ?
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He tried to sneak and call sid ..
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Anaya: Noo , u can make a call later ... They need to cut the cake at the same time as they got married and we only have two hours... so you can do that later ..
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EOC

Okay bye ..

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