Recently saw a story with over 159 parts and on seeing it I knew each chapter was two sentences long
Why? You're just giving your reader more ads
In the same way, don't write a 10,000 word story because probably (if most of it happens in the same event) more than half of it will be filler and it'll feel like the author is trying to get you to keep reading it until you finally get to the point
I wrote a 3000 word oneshot once (now deleted and I'm honestly kinda sad about it, I spent like an hour on that shit and almost liked it), and the way I made it so it didn't seem to be prolonging the story to the point, chopped the story progression into several days
Is that to say I could've put it into three parts? Yes, but this is a oneshot book. I'm not gonna say (the book I was writing for was not unO), for example: Jera 1-1, Jera 1-2, Jera 1-3, and then move on to a different chapter like arlaine 1
There just does not seem to be a good point to this
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Fine: huh, so we might need some more butter as well
Fine: and a fridge
Sera: I'd like cold water and not have to walk to my dorm every time just for some damn water
Fine: just drink regular water
Sera: that is an insult
Blick: guys it's literally 11 pm what is so important that you have to talk about it now???
Fine: water
Sera: now fuck off we're discussing business topics
Blick: ...you... don't own a busi-
Fine: SERA SAID SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU BITCH, IT'S NOT SO HARD
whydoiexist: that's what sh-
Fine: ...
whydoiexist: oh come on it's still funny
Fine: Isen, this just isn't the time
whydoiexist: what it's-
Blick: Isen, no
Remiiiiiiiiii <3: damn rat
whydoiexist: OH NOW REMI'S SAYING I'M A FUCKING RAT
Sera: anyways John I just got everything
Fine: wait what I thought we would go together
Sera: you were busy finishing your sudoku book
Fine: oh yeah I was
Sera: oh shit there's gonna be a tornado soon
Fine: seriously?
Fine: and we already did this shit at the hotel
Blick: why isn't school cancelled then
Sera: idk
Sera: anyways it's tomorrow
Blick: WHAT
Asslo: None of you knew about this? Watch the news.
Fine: oh you mean the news where "we basically try to anger you"?
Asslo: Yes.
Fine: nah, ain't doing that shit
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wellston but hell | unOrdinary Chatfic
Fanfiction____________________________________________ Note: Contains spoilers for the webtoon, unOrdinary, authored and illustrated by "uru-chan". ____________________________________________ A story on the unOrdinary cast and their group chat, except everyo...