I added Tyberos as another character since i wanted to give our man Ranesk an ally that was above him. And yes, i already laid out the plot involving Tyberos.
Originally it was going to be a dreadnought or even a custodes.
Though he will not be a major character despite him being another marine. The main focus of this story will always be the Retributor who got here first. There will be more talk and socialization than there is war and conflict in this story.
though i am ending this story in the future with a war.
A big one.
If all of you want it, I can remove The red wake from the story and do a little rewrite. It won't be too difficult as I also have a backup Plot if Tyberos is going to be removed.
Should I keep him?
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Suffer Not The Radiant
FanfictionIn the depths of the grim darkness that shrouds the 41st millennium, the Astartes stand steadfast as the stalwart defenders of humanity. With hearts as cold as the void, these unyielding warriors wield the Emperor's fury as their own, crushing all w...
