Ok so, I'm editing book Shikamaru books back to back since it'd be pretty stupid to just do one book, stop and then not do the other so I'll start uploading the edited chapters once both are done and dusted rather than doing it the way I did with Cold Eyes (that was weird, what was I thinking?)
We're going to be getting rid of those cringe ass things my younger teen self decided was perfect... Like the unnecessary amnesia scene?
I'll also be developing some things properly so that there aren't just random drop and run lines that literally do nothing to the story (I noticed I've done that a lot while doing my initial read through and I am... confused so I can't imagine how you guys are feeling 🫠)Edits begin: 29th May 2024
I've been changing the l/n clan members names too because what was I thinking. Threw a David... Lloyd... and many other very non-Japanese names in here rather than... Japanese ones? I'll put a name conversion at the top like I did with the jutsu in Cold Eyes so any returning to reading won't be too lost.
Thanks for your understanding and I hope I can give justice to this fic for you without making you lose something you enjoyed :)
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Edits concluded: 04/06/24
Oop they're done now.
What do I do? Find translators maybe? Hm...
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