The Prophecy (Part One) (re-editing)

Re-editing! Please read!

I know that I went through and edited this when I was halfway through the second part (compared to where I am now), but after going through and reading this again, I realized that this needs major editing. MAJOR. I have a few ideas that I started to incorporate, but had forgotten about (cuz I dun kno how to rite a story, durhur), and so a lot of thing went unfinished. It makes me sad because, according to comments, a lot of people actually caught on to hidden ideas that I totally forgot to go through with. This is two years old, after all. 

So, long story short, I am putting the second part on hold and completely re-writing this part, starting at chapter two. Weird concepts will be removed, scenes will flow nicer, and the constant switching of pov's will be changed so that it is easier to read. I will republish when I finish them. If you have already read this part and don't want to re-read, rest in peace, because the main storyline will stay the same. The way it's played out will just be very different. For those of you who are just now reading this, the title of already edited chapters will be marked with something.. I dunno.. an asterisk? *

I'm not sure how long this will take, but I can guarantee that it won't happen overnight.

Please have patience with me, and I hope that you will like the changes that I make! 

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EDIT: 

This story is now three-four years old (I actually lost track). 

The second part is finished and although it needs some tlc as well, the flow is better in that book than in this one. I hope, anyway. 

The entirety of this story will be edited in due time.

Eventually. 

For now, it's so bad that I'm actually embarrassed when people read it.. so please bear with me. 

xoxo