Indecisive mess

Song response/ idfc by blackbear

Hey so you remember back in the day on YouTube they used to have video response? 
Where someone would put up a video and people would respond with a video (some still do)
Well I wanted to do something like that but with a song
So I took the song above (if you haven't heard it you should) 
I just bleeped out the bad words
And I "responded" to what the Singer was way saying. 
So the [] are my lyrics
What I wanted to do with my writing with this is act like they we're the thoughts he had in his head from what he was actually saying out loud. 
As of my knowledge I don't think anyone else has done this so if ya wanna do something like this please credit me that way I can see it and read it and give it some love
                                 ///
Tell me pretty lies
[even if it makes me die a little inside everytime]
Look me in the face
[Tell me the truth let's close this case] 
Tell me that you love me
[Just let the truth set us free] 
Even if it's fake
[Never mind don't for my sake] 
Cause I don't really care, at all
[Although you we're never there, I wish you would answer my calls] 
                                     ~
You've been out all night
[I really wish we didn't have to fight] 
I don't know where you've been
[But I wouldn't be surprised if you sinned] 
You're slurring all your words
[That I wish I never heard] 
Not making any sense
[With words that I can't see through is this the real you?]
But I don't really care, at all
[Although you were never there, I wish you would answer my calls] 
                                    ~
Cause I have hella feelings for you
[I really wish that weren't true] 
I act like I don't care
[Because none of this is fair]
[I don't want the sadness to take over anymore you used to make this feeling so rare] 
                                    ~
Cause I have hella feelings for you
[I really wish that weren't true] 
I act like I don't really care
[Because none of this is fair] 
Because I'm so scared
[I wish you wouldn't have acted like you cared] 
                                    ~
I'm only a fool for you
[It shows in everything I do] 
And maybe you're too good for me
[It didn't take much for me to see] 
I'm only a fool for you
[It shows in everything I do] 
But I dont really care, at all, oh
                                 ///
So that was it! Woah I didn't know this was wow that was deep;)))) 
What did you think of the concept and the actual writing I did? 
Please leave your thoughts I love to read them and respond
I'm sorry if I ruined the song lol and I hope it made sense
I just wanted to give this a try because I've had this idea for a month or so

Until next time BYE