*in a rusted colored sky filled Equestria*
Twilight, Dusk, Barbra and Spike: [screaming as they hit the ground]
*they all slowly get up*
Twilight: *groans* What happened? *looks around*
Dusk- *looks around* Where are we?
Spike/Barbra: *worries as they recognize their surroundings* Um, Twilight? Dusk? Isn't this where the castle normally is?
Twilight/Dusk: [gasps in shock as they realize the castle's gone]
Spike: *worried* How did we get here?
Barbra- *worried*
Twilight: *concerned* The last thing I remember was going to the Tree of Harmony and then standing in front of it...
Dusk- *looks at her* And then the next thing we're here right?
Twilight- *nods* Exactly...
Barbra- *realizes* Those two spirits...*looks at Twilight and Dusk* They phased into you two I guess and then both of your eyes glowed white and then we touched you and now we're here..
Spike: *thinks* Oh! They did say something before phasing into you guys...something along the lines of you guys wanting to know what would happen if you guys and the gang never met...*confused* But why?
Twilight/Dusk- *looks at them* *concerned* It's just like you said...
Spike/Barbra: *looks at them* What do you mean?
Twilight: We wanted to know what would happen if we all never met
Dusk- *looks at her* I guess the Tree granted our request by pulling us back to the present!
Spike: So we're back where— I mean, when we started?
Barbra- *shrugs in concern*
Twilight: Not exactly. Everything's different. *looks at the map* Look. The map doesn't even make sense anymore! The Crystal Empire takes up half of Equestria! *looks at the crystals* In dark crystals...
Dusk- *looks at the sky* *concerned* Not to mention the bleak rusted color sky...
Spike/Barbra: Plus there's the whole missing castle thing.
Twilight: *serious* Right! This is too big to handle on our own.
Spike/Barbra: *worried*You think?
Dusk: *serious* We need to find our friends and get help!
*they walk in a empty barred Ponyville*
[crow cawing]
Spike: *worries* I'm gettin' a bad feeling about this.
Barbra- *worried* *looks at him worriedly* You and me both.
Twilight Sparkle: *reassures them* I know, but this is Ponyville. How bad could things be?
Dusk- *shocked* Uh, you might want to take that back
*they all look at what supposed to be Sugarcube Corner*
Spike/Barbra: *concerned* Is that Sugarcube Corner?
Twilight/Dusk: *concerned* I don't understand.
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The Cutie Re-Mark (My Better Version)
FanfictionTwilight and Dusk question why them and their friends were chosen as the Elements of Harmony and the Tree of Harmony provides them the answer of if they weren't chosen which changes the course of Equestria's history. Twilight and Dusk start to under...