The Crystal War and King Sombra and Queen Obscura's Reign

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*in a rusted colored sky filled Equestria*

Twilight, Dusk, Barbra and Spike: [screaming as they hit the ground]

*they all slowly get up*

Twilight: *groans* What happened? *looks around*

Dusk- *looks around* Where are we?

Spike/Barbra: *worries as they recognize their surroundings* Um, Twilight? Dusk? Isn't this where the castle normally is?

Twilight/Dusk: [gasps in shock as they realize the castle's gone]

Spike: *worried* How did we get here?

Barbra- *worried*

Twilight: *concerned* The last thing I remember was going to the Tree of Harmony and then standing in front of it...

Dusk- *looks at her* And then the next thing we're here right?

Twilight- *nods* Exactly...

Barbra- *realizes* Those two spirits...*looks at Twilight and Dusk* They phased into you two I guess and then both of your eyes glowed white and then we touched you and now we're here..

Spike: *thinks* Oh! They did say something before phasing into you guys...something along the lines of you guys wanting to know what would happen if you guys and the gang never met...*confused* But why?

Twilight/Dusk- *looks at them* *concerned* It's just like you said...

Spike/Barbra: *looks at them* What do you mean?

Twilight: We wanted to know what would happen if we all never met

Dusk- *looks at her* I guess the Tree granted our request by pulling us back to the present!

Spike: So we're back where— I mean, when we started?

Barbra- *shrugs in concern*

Twilight: Not exactly. Everything's different. *looks at the map* Look. The map doesn't even make sense anymore! The Crystal Empire takes up half of Equestria! *looks at the crystals* In dark crystals...

Dusk- *looks at the sky* *concerned* Not to mention the bleak rusted color sky...

Spike/Barbra: Plus there's the whole missing castle thing.

Twilight: *serious* Right! This is too big to handle on our own.

Spike/Barbra: *worried*You think?

Dusk: *serious* We need to find our friends and get help!

*they walk in a empty barred Ponyville*

[crow cawing]

Spike: *worries* I'm gettin' a bad feeling about this.

Barbra- *worried* *looks at him worriedly* You and me both.

Twilight Sparkle: *reassures them* I know, but this is Ponyville. How bad could things be?

Dusk- *shocked* Uh, you might want to take that back

*they all look at what supposed to be Sugarcube Corner*

Spike/Barbra: *concerned* Is that Sugarcube Corner?

Twilight/Dusk: *concerned* I don't understand.

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