I think that the first two volumes of this story was at best, ok. I say that because I believe if I used my chapter system since the beginning, the story would feel more merged together. My writing has feel like it improved and I'm always up for more suggestions to continue improving. Also since my writing has improved, that leaves the first two volumes to be possibly improved. But while it may be nice, I think I may leave it as a reminder of improvement and how far I've come.
My first thought when creating this story was that I could make it parallel to the story with the episodes. This later proves to be a problem the more volumes I move forward to. With the introduction of volume 3, I couldn't maintain my system of episode chapters and switched to the far better personal chapter where I can freely merge chapters. With the continuation of this story onto volume 4 and onward, I have to keep track of every character that is alive so that I don't accidentally make any plot holes. This includes RWBY, added Blazblue characters, and personal characters.
Also a few questions:
Is anyone still reading this?
I do plan to continue this story until it ends. With continued support from readers that constantly give me motivation. While reading is nice do people actually enjoy this story?
How would people feel if I redid volumes one and two with my new system?
All in all, thank you everyone for reading, commenting, voting, and whatnot.
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