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I'm now knowing how this book is gonna go. It's no longer gonna be one of my many books I have that I 'go with the flow' with. No! I have a plan for this book. But for that plan to fall into place I need to change some stuff. I've thought and I've figured out how to take this book the direction I want to to go in while not changing much of the book.
Here's the things that have changed:
Tord:
Tord is now going to still love Tom and doesn't want to hurt his friends. But he loves them to much. He wants the perfect life for Tom and will be having to do things that Tom doesn't want him to do without his permission.

Tom: Tom shall stay the same except that he isn't to much feminine like I shaped him to be. Instead he will be like how he is in eddsworld, but less masculine. Other than that, nothing much has changed

Edd: Edd is the same. (If you want for info on Edd's character keep reading. If not, skip ahead this paragraph)
Edd is very trusting with people and can accidentally get attached to something very easily. He finds love and goodness in his friends (like me in real life) so the fact that one of his best friends that he's known since childhood tried to kill them messed him up. He could barely trust anyone and when he got back on his feet Tord stole Tom. He was unstable and couldn't really trust anyone. But now he has grown to the fact that he can't trust everyone. So in the army he tries to seem nice but inside he doesn't trust anyone but Tom, Matt, and himself.
This will have ALOT to do in the future of this book

Matt: Matt hasn't changed AT ALL except that he in like a therapist to Edd when Edd is feeling down

Paul and pat: these two I ALWAYS get mixed up. When I first started reading eddsworld fan fics I thought that Pat was Paul and Paul was pat. But now I have myself under control from writing them wrong. Don't worry😂

Amy: Amy is still the same. But I have to say that to all my Amy fans reading this, you're in for a treat. Some of you have already been trying to figure out stuff about Amy and I'm super proud! But hey



THAT'S JUST A THEORY

Dr. E:
Dr E won't be in a lot of chapters. But you will see her again

Damien: Damien is the same sarcastic apprentice he is, but soon will grow to be an amazing person. I promise.
Also, I gave the other army's healer apprentice a name. It's Bryan.
Let's just say... expect to be seeing more gay ships of mine come up😉

Story: (here we go)
This is the new story plot. You'll see that it doesn't change much but some things here and there have been rotated so I can fit this future of the book in

Tom has been half monster all this time, but no one knows. Okay, now to the story

It's been years since the robot attack and Edd, Matt, and Tom have made happy homes in apartments that were close by. One day, though, Tord comes back. None are that happy but after Tord explains himself then Edd starts to warm up to his being back. He has to sleep in Tom's apartment. The next morning, while out on a walk, Tord kidnaps Tom. They take him to the red army base. When Tom wakes up Tord tells him that he knows he's half monster. Then for the next month Tom has been going through experiment after experiment. Tom has tried to escape (and even almost did once) But was never able to. Skip to a month or two later: Tord has kidnapped Edd and Matt. He shows them to Tom while in his monster form. Tom is angry at Tord for showing him this monster of his, thinking that he did it to make Tom more angry, but Tord actually did it because he wanted to show Tom that his friends cared. Tord didn't realize it, but he was starting to grow feelings for the short male. After that, Tom starts to make the tests and training easier, seeing how he was hurting Tom with hard experiments
(Ravin... RAVIN.... GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF THE GUTTER!)
Time skip later: We learn more about the army. We learn that there are a lot of army.
Then the silver army (right? It was the silver army right?) attacked the red army base. And as you know (*sniff*) shot Tom. Tom happily survived (yyaaayyyy) and now is awake from almost 2 months of being asleep in pain (ever heard of season 4 and 5 of mystreet?)
Anyways, that's all. I hope y'all enjoyed knowing more about the living characters and I'll see y'all later.
Also, if you made it to the end THANK YOU! You have no idea what this means to me.
I wanna continue the book ALOT! NO ONE KNOWS WHAT I WANNA DO WITH THIS BOOK! NOT EVEN MY FRIEND THAT HELPS ME THAT I ALWAYS TALK ABOUT!
So the fact that I HAVE to continue this because I don't want the book to go a different way and no one knows how I want it to go makes it kinda scary at times.
Sorry for the small vent. now past all the sad stuff THANK YOU!
6k READS! 163 STARS! SO MANY LOVING COMMENTS! AHHHHH! THANK YOU SO MUCH! THANK YOU!
I also wanna say thank you so much to Lilacocobare  for the amazing fan art. But Lila, sadly I can not see the art. When ever I press the link you sent me I'm always greeted with 404 not found. And it breaks my heart. I would love to see it so if you could could you please email it to me at magicaltomboywolf@gmail.com
Thank you so much if you can.
Again, I hope y'all enjoyed this long chapter of updates and I'll see y'all later
Bye :)
~Ravin. N (11/14/18)

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