(19/45) REWRITTEN/REWRITING
Oliver Moy is your next door neighbour and you hate him, you always have. He's rude, snarky and probably is the same from last time I saw him. But will this hatred be broken with some hidden feelings...
Thank you for 100...
I get up out of bed and go downstairs for breakfast. I then get ready for school.
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I get in my car and drive to school. I get into school and open my locker, then Indiana comes up to me and hugs me.
Indiana: you okay? She says concerned as she places a her hand in my back
Elissa: I'm great. I say smiling and put a book into my locker
Chase: does she know? He whispers to Indiana worried. What's going on?
Elissa: know what? I say confused
Indiana: I think you need to talk to Oliver. She says awkwardly
Elissa: why? I say as my emotions go from happy to scared. What's he done...
Chase: he maybe almost kissed someone. He says nervous
Elissa: oh... I will talk to him. I say as my mood drops
They walk away and then Oliver shows up and walks closer to me so my back is on my locker.
Oliver: missed you. He says then starts kissing me passionately
Then I carefully push him away.
Elissa: em... I say nervous
Oliver: did I do something wrong. He says confused and takes a step back
Elissa: no,no it's just can we talk. I say nervous
Oliver: sure. He says confused
We go into a empty hall and I am about to talk when Mark (Olivers friend) runs in
Mark: hey yo... Em can you come and help me with something just... Arron through up in my locker. He says gagging
Oliver: eh well- He says looking at me
Elissa: oh no you can go. I say smiling
Oliver: okay He says with awkward smile
I need to tell him.
I see Chase and I walk up to him.
Elissa: hey ch- I say sad
Chase: did you talk to him. He intrups me
Elissa: no. I mumble
Chase: why? He says annoyed
Elissa: how do you even know if it is true. I say annoyed too
Chase: because.... Me and indi saw him with a girl named alexa they where just chatting. He says sad
Elissa: o-okay I say sigh
Chase: then Oliver leaned in to kiss her and she said sorry I am with someone. Then we walk past him like nothing happened. He says sad
I need to talk to him, where is he Chase.
Chase: probably lunch. He says smiling a bit
Elissa: ok, and thanks for telling me. I say hugging him
I walk into the lunch hall and sit down. I push Mark to the side
Mark: hey! He says annoyed
Elissa: oh I'm sorry. I say sarcastic
Oliver: you okay? He asks drinking his apple juice
Elissa: so are you hiding anything. I say annoyed
Oliver: what do you mean? He says nervous. He knows, doesn't he
Mark: are you hiding anything bro. He says confused
Elissa: hey if you intrupt this conversation again I will break your neck. I say mad to mark
Elissa: I think you should just confess. I say annoyed
Oliver: can you just tell me. He says nervous
Elissa: fine but I need the truth I mean it Oliver the truth. I say as a tear drips down my cheek
Oliver: okay He mumbles
Elissa: is- it true... That you a- and alexa almost kissed. I say holding back tears that are burning in my eyes
Oliver: Elissa I em He says ashamed
Elissa: I knew it. I say then stand up and run out of the hall
Then Oliver comes after me, he grabs my arm
Elissa: Oliver let go! I shout crying
He lets go and I turn around
Elissa: seriously after all we have been through I actually thought that I could give you a chance. I say as tears start to roll down my face
Oliver: look I didn't mean to kiss her. He blurts out
Elissa: wait yous kissed, when. I say crying
There was silence
Elissa: when Oliver! I shout
Oliver: probably 10mins after chase and Indiana saw us. He says sad
Elissa: you know what it doesn't matter. I say wiping my tears away
Oliver: what do you mean? He says confused
Elissa: yous to deserve each other. Because if you ask someone to be your girlfriend and the next day you cheat on them, then they obviously don't like you. I say hurt
Oliver: no it was an accident. He says sad
Elissa: you forgot you had a girlfriend when you had your tongue down some other girls throat. I say breaking
Oliver: can we just talk about it? He says sad
Elissa: no, I'm going home, you and alexa have fun. I say then run away
I get in my car and start crying more
Why am I so dumb Oliver is known for making out with girls all the time. I can't believe I thought I saw I sweet, caring person.
Then it happens again, after I stop crying I get a phone call from the unknown number.
Voice:HEY ELISSA
Me: what
Voice: it's me
Voice: Jack... Can you come to the studio it's important.
Elissa: on my way
SOS End of call
I drive to the studio and it was dark. I got out of my car and then someone grabbed me and brought me throw the back way of the studio.
I was screaming and squirming to trying break free
They bring me through the back and shut the door (the back of the studio is just a black room) they push me on the wall with there hand over my mouth.
They turn on the light and they are revealed the person was....
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