Hi, guys. It's the author. I wanted to let you all know that after reading and re-reading this story, I feel like I need to rewrite this.
I'm hoping to solve a few things with this rewrite.
1: First and foremost, I want to improve the quality and general plotline. To be perfectly honest, I just kinda went with whatever I thought about without really detailing much. Sometimes it works, and sometimes... it just doesn't.
2: I want to fix some continuity errors. I have extra bits of lore behind the scenes, and after reading some of the scenes again... yeah... I need to rewrite them to have everything make more sense.
3: I know where I want to go with this series now, and, hopefully, by rewriting it I can fulfill that wish of mine.
4: ... Eve's first backstory... yeah, let's forget that ever happened, okay?
I would like feedback of any kind to know how I'm doing. Feedback will help me know what I'm doing wrong, and though I may not listen to all of what you guys will (hopefully) give me, I will try my best to improve anything that wrong with the story. I want us all to enjoy it.
Thanks for reading through this, and I hope you'll continue reading my stories. I sincerely hope you enjoy what I have planned for this rewrite.
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Pokémon Platinum (Currently being rewritten as Pokémon: Platinum Chapter)
FanfictionOne day in Twinleaf Town, two friends named Chris and Barry decide to go on a journey. They meet a girl named Dawn and they all receive their first pokémon. The three of them, along with Gym Leader Roark, head on an important quest given to them by...
