Pokémon Platinum (Currently being rewritten as Pokémon: Platinum Chapter)

Chapter 13: Commander Jupiter

Dawn is holding her badge as we walk out of the gym. We walk to the Pokémon Center and heal our Pokémon. Eevee sits next to me and leans on my leg. We start to walk to the rooms when my Pokétch rings. I answer. "Hello?"

"Chris, it's Looker."

"What's up?"

"I have received word of a Team Galactic building in Eterna City. Stay on guard."

"Got it."

"I'll talk to you when I learn something else."

He hangs up and I yawn. Dawn looks at me. "What is it?"

"Team Galactic. There's a headquarters here in Eterna."

I hear my Pokédex say an alert. I look at it. Someone is calling. I go to a phone and pick up. Professor Sycamore is there. "Hello, Chris!"

"Hello, Professor!"

"I forgot to give you a Pokédex to accurately read Eevee's moves."

I nod. "Alright, send it over."

A red pack appears in the transport terminal. I take it and attach it to the back of my Pokédex. I thank Professor Sycamore, then walk out of the Pokémon Center along with Dawn, Barry, and Roark. We all approach the Team Galactic base. Some grunts look at me. I glare at them. Eevee growls. I smile. "Eevee, go."

Eevee leaps from my hat and lands across from the grunts. They chuckle, then one steps forward throwing a pokéball. A Zubat starts flying. I grin. "Iron Tail."

Eevee swiftly knocks out the Zubat. The grunt looks shocked. I smirk, then grab two pokéballs. "Staravia, Luxio... go!"

The two pokémon prepare for battle. The grunts steps back, then run to the building behind them. "Thunder Wave," I say calmly.

A light shockwave hits one of the grunts, stunning him. Piplup waddles up. "Bubblebeam."

Piplup jumps up and sprays bubbles at the other grunt, making him flee. I kneel in front of the paralyzed grunt. "Key Card, now."

He starts shaking even more. "Back pocket."

I grab the key card, then set a Paralyze Heal next to him. He grabs it as the rest of us walk to the front door. I pick up Piplup. Roark's Cranidos knocks open a vent cover. I let Piplup climb into it. Dawn lets Pachirisu go with her again. I hold Rotom's pokéball. "Cut their electricity," I say letting him out.

Rotom appears, then phazes through the wall. "Our attack begins now," I say.

I scan the card and let everyone run in. I walk in with Eevee, Luxio, and Staravia with me. Dawn and I stay together. Barry and Roark split from us to wreak havoc. "They know I'm with you," Uxie says. "Let me help."

I smirk and grab the pokéball. "Stay close."

I let out the Legendary Pokémon. Dawn lets out Mesprit. They push away grunts, intimidating them. I hear a woman chuckling over the speakers. "Looks like we have some intruders. The Mesprit holder, and the Uxie holder."

"Who is this?" I ask.

"I am Commander Jupiter."

Dawn nods to me. "Let's go," she mouths.

[Piplup's POV]

I walk next to Pachirisu. "Where are we going to go?"

Pachirisu looks around. "I don't know. This place is much bigger than the last place."

"What if we cause some trouble for some of the people our masters are fighting?!"

Pachirisu looks at me and smiles. "That's brilliant."