Chance

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52: INT. HOTEL ROOM NIGHT CUT TO:

Brian brings Rachael back to the hotel.

BRIAN: (comes in holding her up) It's alright my love, just come lie down.

RACHAEL: (slurring) Brian... Brian... Come here... (stumbles to the bed)

BRIAN: Darling, maybe you should lie down.

RACHAEL: Only if you come over here and put your hands on my grease gun!

BRIAN: (blushes hard) (to himself) "I wanted to kill Fred, he dared a lovely, delicate girl to drink and she gave in. She began to remove her tank-top revealing a black bra with blue arrows. I will admit that I was tempted to go to her, but I wanted us to wait til we were married."

RACHAEL: You know what? Screw it! (pulls him on top of her and kisses him)

BRIAN: (to himself) "Suddenly she pulled me on top of her and I felt my trembling lips meet hers. I gave in for about 30 seconds before I got up. I wanted to do it right, not like this."

RACHAEL: (passes out)

BRIAN: (sighs) (tucks her in and kisses her forehead)

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