65: INT. HOTEL ROOM NIGHT CUT TO:
Rachael is about to take the test.
BRIAN: (caresses her cheek) Are you sure you don't want to come tonight?
RACHAEL: Yeah, I think I'm just gonna lay down for awhile.
BRIAN: Are you sure you're alright?
RACHAEL: I'm fine honey... (caresses his cheek) Brian, you're sweating. Are you alright?
BRIAN: Yeah, I'm alright, it's just hot in here. I've gotta go... (kisses her cheek and leaves)
JAYME: Is he gone?
RACHAEL: Mm-hm.
JAYME: All right come with me into the bathroom.
RACHAEL: (both go into the bathroom)
66: INT. HOTEL ROOM (BATHROOM) DAY CUT TO:
Rachael takes the test.
RACHAEL: (takes the test)
JAYME: Ok, 5 minutes.
RACHAEL: Ok... (to herself) "I was trembling inside, I couldn't be pregnant now, I prayed this was just a case of food poisoning."
JAYME: It's been 5 minutes.
RACHAEL: (sighs) (looks at it)
JAYME: What's it say?
RACHAEL: (pauses) I'm pregnant.
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Love Is On The Way: A Brian May Fan Fiction
FanfictionWhen a young Queen fan unexpectedly meets the man of her dreams, they begin a friendship that slowly becomes love