This is my first fanfic so criticism and comments are allow but keep the criticism to a minimum.
(Also this story is mostly ideas I have to make a fanfic so may call it a practice I guess? Any way if you enjoy great otherwise look for something else...
As the bullhead lands everyone walks out of the bullhead while i see jaune looking nuch better since so i went towards him to chat a bit at least till the explosion happens
Y/N: Hey Jaune
Jaune: hey Y/N thanks for the medicine and the water it feels like (smiles at me)
Y/N: yea miracle i had it on me (laughs a bit) So exited for beacon?
Jaune: (nervously) Y-yea
Y/N: something wr-
I was interrupted by the sound of a explosion so i ran towards where it was and i see none other than weiss schnee and ruby rose on the ground from making the explosion
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Weiss: Unbelievable! This exactly what the kind of thing im talking about! (While ruby nervously twiddle her fingers)
Ruby: Im really really sorry
Weiss: You complete Dolt!
Y/N: hey cool it ice queen
Weiss: oh great another dolt...
Y/N: she apologize and dont blame it all to her so calm down princess (crosses arms)
Blake: its heiress actually
As we stop and look who talk to it was none other than the cat fanaus blake belladonna
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Blake: Weiss schnee, heiress to the schnee dust company (while holding a vital of dust) one of the largest producers of energy propellant in the world
Weiss: Finally some recondition
Y/N: isnt that that same company with questionable business partners and infamous labor forces
Blake: (nods in agreement) the very same
Weiss: (studdered) what- how-- dare-- the nerve of (walks towards blake while ruby giggles) ugh! (Takes the vital from blakes hands and walks furiously away)
Y/N: (shakes head) good grief....
Ruby: I promise il make this up to you!! (Tells weiss altho weiss completely ignores her and sighs) i guess im not the only one having a rough first day...(turns exited and turns to blake...) so whats!- (...only to see her leave and fall to her knees and falls back to the ground completely ignoring me) welcome to beacon....
